Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 30, 2019
W6 Friday
I've enjoyed this week it has been a really good week I have enjoyed playing dodgeball and doing work sadly one of our teachers his name is Nogo he is really sick it sucks but he will hopefully be back soon.
Wednesday, August 21, 2019
The Weekend
On saturday in the Morning I woke up and had a shower after I had a shower I went on my PS4. To Play terraria After about 2hours I had lunch and watched youtube for about an hour after that me and my Mum went to my friends house. I went into his little brothers room he was playing on his xbox. He was playing minecraft with his friends after that we went back home I hopped onto my trampoline to do flips I was on their for about 30mins after that I went inside to have dinner after dinner I went on my ps4 to play more terraria after that I went to bed.
Friday, August 16, 2019
The weekend
In the weekend I stayed at my dads house for the weekend in the morning I woke up and brushed my teeth after I brushed my teeth me and my dad helped put the wood away. After we put the wood away we went shopping to pack n save to get some food. Once we got home me and my dad went to the wanoni school grounds and we flew my drone around. After that when we got home We watched a action movie together after that we had dinner then we went to bed.
Science Experiment
On Thursday at 2:15pm me and my friends made some Ginger beer for our science experiment It took us about an hour to make first we had to put all the ingrediants in the pot then we turned it down to medium heat then we put the sugar in the pot and stired it till it dissolved then we put the yeast in after that The ginger beer was ready we put the ginger beer in two 1.5 liter bottles then we left it in a warm place then it was ready.
Tuesday, August 13, 2019
Financial Literacy
On monday we did Financial literacy we learned about spending and saving money first we did some questions after the questions we played a game each team got $1800 and we had to spend it and save it
we were planning to go on a trip to fiji we had to buy stuff or not buy stuff it was really fun.
Thursday, August 8, 2019
how to write a quality blog comment
Tip 1 compliment the writer in a specific way!
Be positive and be specific
Tip 2 Add new information
Its always good to add factual information to your comment for example if someone is writing about the statue of liberty and you’ve seen it or read about the statue of liberty go ahead and write some new factual information how old is it how tall is it be sure to look at the comment section to make sure no one has written what you want to say and if no one has go ahead and write it fun adding factual information to your comment
Tip 3 make a connection
To make a comment better it is nice to have a connection with greater connections remind
People of things for example lets say your friend published a post about their camping trip it reminded you of hiking a big bear then you might want to share some facts about your trip that is how you make connections with the writer
Tip 4 End with a question
Its always a good thing to ask relevant questions at the end of your comments try to get a conversation going exactly for example if someone knows something about ladybugs and you are wondering something about their lifes band or the colours that they come in the knee should ask hopefully the blogger will respond to you.
Tip 5 proofread your comment
The last step for leaving quantity comments is to proofread panda here is gonna teach us some tips about proofreading profread panda says at the beginning of your sentence you use capital letters and at at the end use punctuation and always use one exclamation mark and if you want to really show excitement use more words.
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